Wednesday, October 3, 2007

revelations pt 1

discovered and rescued from an old gaiaonline literary thread i was a member of in 2005

Revelations Excerpt 1:

how can i live this life
when my soul is so weary
I must I must

how can i have faith
when the world seems against me
i trust i trust

where has this peace
that stills me now come from
inside inside

what makes tomorrow
so forgiving on a broken soul
i tried i tried

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^^I simplified what i was trying to say and i'm wondering if i didn't simplify it too much.... please let me know what you think.

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